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parents and children ('family is the first community')


fabaca 2 / 4  
Nov 12, 2011   #1
family is the first community that children step in,and also parents are the first persons that children communicate with them.
children do exactly what they see so parents should be careful about their behavior ,because they set an example to their children.
so with this way parents can influence on children, but when children go to school they meet new people make friends and teir relations are developed so they experience new situations and become familiar with new matters.

if they become friend with honest people their character would promote .
so it's important that parents be aware of their children's relationships and be intimate with them so their children feel relax in their relation with them .
olivier007 2 / 3  
Nov 13, 2011   #2
children do exactly what they see {so} parents should be careful about their behavior ,because they set an example to their children.
dont say "so" but instead
children do exactly what they see. Therefore, parents should be careful about their behavior ,because they set an example to their children.
im pretty sure that: example to somebody is correct.
but overall i like it!!! try to be more creative .say something that the reader will remember . like a personal situation.


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