Hey guys, I'm applying to NYU CAS for 2009, and I'm not sure on my chances...
I have a 3.4 gpa, class rank is top 20%, 2100 (710 cr, 690 math, 700 writing) composite SAT score, average EC's and some pretty good teacher recs. I figure it'll all come down to my essays, so if you guys could give me any helpful hints it would be very much appreciated.
In addition to any work experience that you listed on your application, please tell us how you spent you most recent summer vacation.
The electric sound of my synthesizer was a familiar these past months. Our band worked hard this summer: we recorded an album and played at least three shows a month in venues such as The Space, Amity Teen Center, and Webster Theater, with many open mics scattered in between the weeks. I also volunteered at a soup kitchen with my youth group each week, and participated in a Myanmar Benefit car wash. Taking advantage of the free time, I explored my interests through my video camera as well: I created two amateur films. Of course, no summer would be complete without any physical toil, and besides the work I did with community service, I spent each week conditioning for and playing tennis.
New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU. If you could engage in an activity or start a club or service organization at NYU, what would it be and how would you envision it impacting the larger community? (7 lines, 500 characters)
Throughout my time in my youth group, I have done many community services in conjunction with the church. One involved the church running a school that teaches children in the area Korean. I volunteered as an assistant tutor for the program, and it was an inspiring experience; there was a large spread of culture and language of a heritage I embrace. At NYU, I would start a similar program to create student-run Korean schools in the New York area. Ideally, I can see NYU allowing it to flourish under the immense cultural influence of the New York community.
Describe a trait or characteristic that has been passed along t you by your family. Tell us why you like or dislike this aspect of yourself. (7 lines, 500 characters)
Stubbornness is a trait that has been passed down to me. My grandfather is a prime example of my family's stubbornness; even after being hospitalized for back injuries, he was out and tending his garden, against doctor's orders to rest and recover. Many would consider such a trait to be a vice, a burden that prevents one from seeing reason and logic. For me, this aspect of myself does the opposite; stubbornness drives me to see the reason in many problems. Academically and artistically, stubbornness is my greatest weapon, and it gives me my enthusiasm and passion.
You have been selected to sing in a talent show. What song would you choose? Why? (7 lines, 500 characters)
Given the chance, I would definitely sing "Capital H" by Motion City Soundtrack. Listening to its lyrics, you may find that it is the cheesy, upbeat story about a lame superhero with high-flying antics and big dreams. To me, the song captures that cheerful and hopeful attitude with its catchy pop melodies and lyrics. I always take an optimistic perspective on life; I like to talk big and am heavily driven by enthusiasm. I am always surprised to find out how well a change in attitude can affect my work for the better.
Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline. (7 lines, 500 characters)
I am an artist and scientist, a creator and a learner: always searching through the lenses of a video camera or in the lab with calculator and chemicals. Both subjects test the limits of the human mind, challenging my creativity and intelligence. In high school, I have passionately explored both computer science and physics while experimenting with movies. While I am positive on my passion for film, I am still attracted by many aspects of science. As an Undecided major, I know that NYU can open up paths for my interests, especially with inter-school minors and broad range of majors.
Your SAT scores are good for NYU and your GPA is decent.
I quickly scanned through your short answers I personally think they are really good.
Anyways,
In "Undecided major", I believe the "U" should be a lowercase "u".
"Both subjects test the limits of the human mind,"
I'm not sure what two subjects are you referring to here.
In my opinion, your second short answer should focus more what you will do with the club the future rather than what you have done.
