manar21abc 1 / 1 Apr 5, 2015 #1The person who has had a significant influence on me is obviously my mother. She put a lot of effort giving me lessons in manners throughout my life, She taught me to be respectful, determinant and full of life. I learn from her all the time and she is the only person who listens to me when I'm in a trouble no matter how silly i was, She is my idol.what do you think?thanks in advance..Manar
AlinaSkripets 11 / 41 5 Apr 6, 2015 #2Manar, could you please write what was the asignment for this piece?? See, if it was to describe why you admire the person you admire, then I would elaborate more on the exact reason and be less vague.
OP manar21abc 1 / 1 Apr 6, 2015 #3Thanks for your respond Alina ... I'm Admitting to to the "University of the people" and this is one of the essays required for the application. I would be grateful if you tell me if there's any grammar mistakes or any mistake at all... Thank you again. Manar.