What would you do if you got in a situation where you could lose your calm? I got my first job at 11th grade as an elementary teacher assistant. I was called in by my supervisor for performance review. She was pretty calm at first, and said a lot of positive things about me.
- (This is a word count limited essay. Do not waste the words with fillers. ) my first job
in the ...elementary
teaching ...
I was called in by my supervisor for performance review.
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One time , I was called in...
keep the kids in silence during snack-time
- keep the kids quiet...
I told her "Mrs. Murray I did ask them to lower their pitch, but not to be in complete silence .
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, I did ask the children to speak in whispers if they had to talk to each other"...
started saying, 'I should never had hired irresponsible students
- ... have
hired irresponsible...
but I choose to be polite
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chose to be polite
We often get indulge in our daily jobs that we forget to step a side and be ourselves
you see the excited in their eyes
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excitement in their eyes...
but I instead thanked her for puttingme in a situation I could teach someone something .
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for placing us in a situation where we could learn from each otherFinally, I wish to add quote by McEnroe that reflects the truth about my journey, "I think it's the mark of a great player to be confident in tough situations."
- Put this in the first paragraph as your hook. Say "John McEnroe once said something that I believe best explains my journey..." then place the quote.
The hook at the beginning is what will set the tone for your paper. That tone cannot be set by a question.