Hi...
I saw that you attempted to write well. However, I think nobody success to write a good writing in his/her first trying. So, do not worry.
Here I do write some minor suggestion related to your writing.
Every person is asked the same question at one point or another. Sometimes the question is asked to a childabout having children , or sometimes a high schoolerabout getting higher education . But, for most people, it is something they are asked multiple times , more times than one would care to be asked. The question is inevitable. You can not run from it or avoid it because everybody has been asked the same thing . What do you want to do with your life, they say. Where do you see yourself ten years from now? What do you want to be when you grow up?
I suggest you to rid the green because it contains a similar idea.I have been asked that question more times than I can count. By teachers, relatives, my parents, my friends' parents, the list goes on and on. My mom constantly asks me that same question . But, after I answer her, she once told me something that I am sure everybody has been told. Do what makes you happy. It may sound cliche, but that is best piece of advice I have ever received. I'm sure everybody has heard that from somewhere, sometime in their life. However, it is something that has always stuck with me. My parents would say that if you do what makes you happy everyday, then you will never work a day in your life.