Unanswered [25] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Undergraduate   % width Posts: 3


I maintain all As & in the top 10; Earlham C- Why I'm academically prepared!


serdarovez 10 / 33 3  
Feb 17, 2013   #1
In determining academic ability and college readiness, the College has given particular weight to a student's performance in college-preparatory or college-level courses and the quality of their chosen academic program. Please comment on how you believe your academic preparation, growth or motivation has prepared you to attend an academically challenging college like Earlham.

I maintain almost all A's and am in the top 10 at my school. In this current school year, I have also spent a lot of time to extra-curricular activities, clubs, volunteering and teaching.I have demonstrated an ability to perform competently during classroom activities and lectures. although, I believe that I did not perform not even close to my absolute (or utmost, your choice) ability since I feel, that I was not challenged to perform to my fullest capacity.

Being a Future Exchange Student (FLEX) program alumna does demonstrate my character and potential as a future leader .While in the United States, my scholastic abilities and leadership potential were thrust into the forefront of my personality. I was not just an ordinary teenage student at my host high school, I was an ambassador and representative of my country. I had to exceed at the expectations placed before me, both academically and socially, and be able to demonstrate myself to my full potential.

Do i answer the PROMPT ?
what should i remove or add ?
Any critics are WELCOMED (@_@)
Didgeridoo - / 306 191  
Feb 17, 2013   #2
I maintain almost all A's and rank in the top ten at my school. In this current school year, I have also devoted a lot of time to extracurricular activities, clubs, volunteering, and teaching. I have demonstrated an ability to perform competently during classroom activities and lectures. although, I believe that I did not perform not even close to my utmost ability, however,because I feel that I was not challenged to perform to my fullest capacity; I seek to attend Earlham College because I believe that it will challenge me. .

Overall, you did a good job of answering the prompt. Best of luck!
PA Applicant 4 / 16 4  
Feb 17, 2013   #3
I agree with the above corrections. Also:

I believe my academic preparation has prepared me to attend Earlham because I maintain almost all A's and rank in the top ten..
^Add an intro sentence. Also, do you know your specific GPA that you could use?

Make sure you connect the second paragraph back to how you are prepared. Personal growth maybe? If so, add an intro sentence about your personal growth. Then you'll have your supporting details and closing sentence.

Good luck!


Home / Undergraduate / I maintain all As & in the top 10; Earlham C- Why I'm academically prepared!
Writing
Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳