Why GeorgiaTech; I have been doing competitive sports for years; triathlete

Firstly, Georgia Tech is widely recognised as a prestigious institute; ranking constantly as one of the top public universities. This level of excellence and the emphasis on research, technology and innovation give me guarantees and make me believe that Georgia Tech is the right place for me to continue to develop and excel as a person. By doing research and having a strong emphasis on innovation I will be closer and better prepared to the reality I will face in the labour market and the needs of the various industries. At last but not the least, I will be in a better position to find innovative and sustainable solutions to technical and global problems of our society.

I have always tried to push myself to the limit to improve every day physically and mentally. That is why I have been doing competitive sports for the past 6 years, the last two as a triathlete. And so, Georgia Tech opens the opportunity for me to contribute to the college community as part of the triathlon team.

Georgia Tech is widely recognized as a prestigious institute; ranking constantly as one of the top public universities. This level of excellence and the emphasis on research, technology and innovation makes me believe that Georgia Tech is the right place for me to continue to develop and excel as a person. By doing research and having a strong emphasis on innovation I will be closer and better prepared to the reality I will face in the labor market and the needs of the various industries. At Last but not the least, I will be in a better position to find innovative and sustainable solutions to technical and global problems of our society.

I have always tried to push myself to the limit to improve every day physically and mentally That is why I have beensuch as by doing competitive sports for the past 6 years, the last two as a triathlete. And so, Georgia Tech would openopens the opportunity for me to contribute to the college community as part of the triathlon team.

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