Hi, this is my essay for The Art Institute of California - San Francisco, and i need some suggestions to make this essay better. Suggestions and criticism are welcomed!
How do you expect your education at The Art Institute of San Francisco to help you attain your career goals?
My career goal is to become an innovative, successful game designer and game director. Gaming has been a major part of my life since youth. When I play certain games, I do not only provide enthusiastic enjoyment towards that game, but also analyze and evaluate the game (such as God of War), pointing out aspects that would've made the game better. I believe that with my passion and determination towards gaming, I will be able to create the best possible game, and that is why the AISF has caught my attention. This Institute consists of various unique classes that will serve as a catalyst to my career, and the institute itself is also recognized by famous game companies such as Blizzard Activision Entertainment and Nintendo. Environment is also a key factor into game design success, with the institute located in San Francisco downtown, a rich blend of sources will be an excellent inspirational environment. With my strong ambition to achieve my goals, without a doubt, AISF is the perfect place to establish my career goal.
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