Foreign Cultures/Studying @ right college; Reasons and objectives for transferring

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I'm not native, so excuse the weakness

It has always been a dream to me to study abroad. I did not have the chance when I graduated from high school because of some family issues. Now, I feel that this is the right time. In this essay I will state the main reasons and objectives that push me toward studying abroad.

There are two main reasons for me to study abroad. First, getting exposed to different cultures and communicating with people from all over the world. Socializing with different people can open my mind and offer me the chance to have friends from the different parts of the world. Second, getting educated by different educational means and studying in a university that will fulfill my educational needs. This variety in the way of studying will help me have a comprehensive understanding of my major.

There are two main objectives that I wish to achieve during my study in the USA. First, improve my English by communicating with native English speakers and being in a society that requires me to use it. Even though my English now is enough for my academic journey, I still have to improve it to have more options in my career. Second, have a successful and enjoyable college journey either in academic or social side.

In conclusion, communicating with foreign cultures, studying at the right college that meets my educational needs, improving my English, and having more career options are basically my main reasons to study abroad. Studying in the USA will simplify things and make possible to me to achieve my objectives.

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