passengers are scurrying in all directions.
Nice!!
End this sentence:
I put on a smile. "Good afternoon sir, how may I help you?"
See what I mean?
Run on sentence:
It is his first time at the Fort Lauderdale-Hollywood International Airport (FLL), he has no idea where Terminal 1 is, much less how to get there, he's frustrated, he's hungry, and he's looking to me with for help. The pressure is on.----Oh!! I was wrong! It is not a run on sentence... but it is a big fat long one.
How about this:
It is his first time at the Fort Lauderdale-Hollywood International Airport (FLL), so he has no idea where Terminal 1 is, much less how to get there. He's frustrated, he's hungry, and he's looking to me with for help. The pressure is on.
When you quote someone, capitalize the first word of their sentence:
Not every situation was as easy as, "Excuse me miss, where are the bathrooms located?".<-----Also, this period right here is unnecessary. The question mark ends the sentence, so the period is unnecessary. And look at how I added a comma before the quotation.
Like this:
Did Kevin say, "Add a comma before the quotation?" and I said, "Yes, he did."