Unanswered [6] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Undergraduate   % width Posts: 3


My educational goals and why I would like to participate in TSA Associates Program


ratuschna 1 / -  
Jan 31, 2011   #1
I need to come up with a one page essay about my education goals and why I want to participate in a program that will get me an associates.

I meed help with structure and ideas to lengthen my essay.
My gaol is to get the associates so that I may go further in my job. I feel that I am being overlooked b/c i don't have a college education to back me up.

I want to participate in this program b/c I don't have the money do get an assocsiates on my own and this program is FREE and it only a few hours a day one day a week and that works with my schedule and if I go to college at a college it will take longer it will cost me and there is not a schedule that can accommodate my schedule.

This is what I have so far:

I am yearning to further my education. Attending this program is important because the knowledge I gain prepares me for a in future in TSA. Furthering my college education is beyond important in my life right now. I thrive for knowledge due to the fact that it helps me prepare for the future with TSA. With that in mind, my current educational goal is to not only receive my Associates with this program but to also continue to further my education within DHS. I am hoping to learn some of the skills that are needed to improve my carrier within TSA and DHS.

I believe that attending the TSA Assossitates Program will provide me with the educational foundation I need in order to achieve both my academic and personal goals.
92angel 3 / 3  
Jan 31, 2011   #2
An essay is supposed to be about one thing ( a topic: in this case my education goals and why I want to participate in a program that will get me an associates.) and each paragraph should be about one main idea.

So for example, in paragraph one you describe who influenced you to do this , in paragraphs 2 and 3 you discuss the reasons why you want the associate degree, in paragraph 4 and 5

how that does that help you to become who/what you are today etc. but remember keep your paragraphs focused on one subject at a time.

Oh and try to use connectors for example, though, but, yet, nonetheless. They make the essay better and give meaning to
the relationship between the sentences.

hope i helped(:

GOOD LUCK
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Feb 7, 2011   #3
I am yearning to further my education. Attending this program is important because the knowledge I gain prepares me for a in future in TSA. Furthering my college education is beyond important in my life right now. I thrive for knowledge due to the fact that it helps me prepare for the future with TSA.

The first few lines of this essay represent an example of brainstorming. This is the way I read my mind trying to brainstorm ideas. You became very redundant here as you repeated the importance of education for your future into the tsa.

The trick is to find some good raw material for your writing. Raw material comes in the form of books and articles. If you read some books and articles it will be easy for you to get great ideas about what is going on in your fields today and what you can do to contribute. First read, then write. Establish some goals, and become familiar with the work of the people who will be teaching you. Can you find anything they have written? It is time to set some deadlines for yourself, and set some goals.

carrier career


Home / Undergraduate / My educational goals and why I would like to participate in TSA Associates Program
Writing
Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳