I dream of playing soccer; Vanderbilt - extracurricular activities or work experiences

1. Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences (Recommended length: 250 words)
Every morning I dream of playing soccer against other rival clubs of my favorite soccer club "Manchester United." Unfortunately in my dream, when Rooney passes me the ball and I fiercely move towards the goal post to score my fabulous goal my mom wakes me up scolding me that I was getting late for my soccer training. Then, I get out to the soccer field with drowsy eyes. And I ask myself a simple question that why do I love soccer? Then I start my warm up exercise and answering myself that soccer is just a simple team game in which full teamwork and communication is required, also I compare myself as a decision maker because I should know the fact that decisions I make can affect my team mates. After the warm up, we start the actual training part which includes dribbling, passing and shooting. With dedication I complete my training course. The practice game is pretty stimulating. Even the players, who get tired because of training, stand up just to participate in the actual match. Every match requires demonstration of discipline and fairness. At the end of training, I do realize why I like soccer, and I can clearly use all the techniques that soccer teaches indirectly in my own life.

Please guys be honest with it and give me suggestions or corrections below. Thanks in advance :) And how do more threads?

I think you can come with a better introduction and ending.
There are a few errors. For example,
Every morning I dream of playing soccer against other rival clubs for my favorite soccer club "Manchester United

And I felt your essay was a little wordy. You can cut down on a LOT of words. Cheers! :)

Honestly, I don't really see how this essay would stand out... It doesn't really say much about you :/
I can sort of tell what you were trying to do, but it lacks the interesting quality...

I feel it`s kinda plain.
So why do you love soccer?(I suppose it`s teamwork and decision-making?) Maybe you can try to tell more specific stories to show these two qualities(or maybe one if you dont have enough space)

Every soccer training will be like this. Your description doesnt sound unique and personal.
Millions of people love soccer, but soccer means different things to each of them. What does soccer mean to you?
There`s a lot of space for improvement, cheers!

Elaborate on why you like it what it means to you and what it has taught you on a more personal level.