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Doctor? Yeah i always wanted to be a Doctor.


cathy2595 3 / 3  
Dec 29, 2012   #1
Why Rochester ?(1000 characters)

I always knew that I had a passion for the sciences, whether I wanted to work with humans or with animals, I knew that eventually I wanted to be some type of doctor. Last summer I had the opportunity to volunteer at my local wildlife refuge center; it was here where I gained a new-found appreciation for environmental Sciences. The University of Rochester's Science Programs appeals to me, as it has world renowned professors. As a student who plans to continue on to medical school, The University of Rochester will challenge me not only as a student but as a citizen. Its academic curriculum, which encourages each student to take a variety of courses, will allow me to become a more holistic professional. In addition, I desire to be a part of an open-minded school environment that values individuality.I am confident that this institution can provide me with a rewarding college experience. More importantly, all of the knowledge I gain will render itself useful in my future endeavors.
admission2012 - / 477 90  
Dec 29, 2012   #2
Hello,

Blah Blah Blah. Take a look at the thousands of past examples on this forum. This essay is so bland and monotonous that I almost fell asleep. This is the same type of essay that comes up day after day. You clearly state that you want to be a doctor, but what you submit here doesn't demonstrate that. Where is the attention to detail. Yes you are limited to 1000 characters but you have managed to use those as ineffectively as possible. Let's see:

The University of Rochester will challenge me not only as a student but as a citizen. (How?)
Its academic curriculum, which encourages each student to take a variety of courses (Courses like?)
will allow me to become a more holistic professional. (How?)
I am confident that this institution can provide me with a rewarding college experience. (Really?, How do you know this? You don't really give details on anything).

Hope this helps


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