The exact topic : Does Reading 2 (the course that I'm studying at school) at school prepare you for work in the future? (8 sentences)
Teaching English is my dream work in the future. Becoming an English teacher, one of an interesting job, is not an easy thing to do. The Reading 2 at school prepares me for this challenging work. In Reading 2, I have to change and work with many different partners every week. Therefore, I have to adjust the way I work continuously to cooperate with them in the best way. Absolutely, it also happens when I become an English teacher, and my partners in the future will be my students. As an English teacher, I will work with many different types of students, so I have to adjust the way I teach to suit each class - or even each student. In a word, Reading 2 at school does prepare me for work in the future.
P.S. Please check this paragraph. Are there any mistakes? Is it well-structured?
Thank you :"3
The first step in achieving your dreams is dreaming of them, when you do, you start to practice them then preach them, this is my way of sharing to you what I did in life and how I master the English language, this is the same way you should do to attain that goal of becoming an English teacher.
Let me help you out on this sentences.
- Teaching English is my dream work in the future .
- Becoming an English teacher ,is one of an interesting job,
- isit's not an easy thing to do.
- In Reading 2, I haveallows me to change..
- Absolutely, itConsequently I know this will also happens when I become..
- As an English teacher, I will work with many different types of students,
- ...so I have to adjust the way I teach to suit each class - or even each student.
- In a wordNeedless to say , Reading 2 at school does prepare me for work in the future.
Well, the best of luck to you!!!
The remarks I made above are very minor and I believe you executed the English language very well.
Aside from grammar, I think that your response could use some more structural changes. As a whole, it is organized pretty well, and although I'm not sure of any word limits there may be for a response, I think that it might be a little too brief to capture all of your thoughts in their entirety. I think that it would be good to at least include a clearly distinguished introduction, which summarizes the reasons reading 2 has helped you, and then states that reading 2 is useful as your thesis.
For your body paragraphs, I think that everything you wrote is very clear and explainable. Maybe using some more personal and specific experiences can help you to elaborate your argument more. Overall, the ideas flow very nicely.
Good luck!
I would like to help you with choosing more descriptive words in your essay.
I really like the first sentence, but since I studied Education, I would like to help you with your sentence: "Teaching English is my dream profession." I'm sure you would agree that you don't want to view it as work, because it is something you dream of doing.
I think you should also be more specific in describing Reading 2. You could state: "The course at school, Reading 2, will help prepare me for this profession."
I would also like to give you one last suggestion. You discuss collaboration with your peers in many of the sentences. However,are you given comprehension exercises, writing assignments, etc? These lessons could help you as begin to prepare for a teaching career.
