I can see your dedication to the project but I think it would engage the reader more if you put a more personal tone to it. I like how you stated what you learned!
"We had the honor of getting the opportunity to give a
"Consequently, we discussed the division of labor in order to do our job more efficiently. F
inally, we decided to
let my friends collect the information, such as concepts, related experiments and equipment, and so on, while I, as an expert on computer among my classmates, combined
all the information provided to make a PowerPoint."
xhausted after several hours of
work, my friends and I prepared for
a forty-five minute presentation on electromagnetic induction to our A Level physics class."
I finished my presentation, I was surprised to learn
that most of my classmates had
achieved a strong grasp of the concept."
"As our teacher congratulated us on our exceptional job, I thanked him for his helpful suggestions and realized the unforgettable lesson I learned regarding cooperation." ---- Maybe you could talk about more lessons besides the one about cooperation. Or give more details (ie-specific anecdote) about cooperation.
I don't know if the last line is needed since you've already mentioned that you know how to cooperate. Or you could put in some examples of how you became a good friend.
Good job and good luck!