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"College In My Thirties" - the positive or negative aspects of coming to college


bradberry916 1 / -  
Aug 28, 2010   #1
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explain the positive or negative aspects of coming to college later in life

College In My Thirties

After I graduated high school I had no intentions of spending another two to four years in school. I was content to have graduated high school and wanted to "enjoy life" and get out on my own. I never really liked school when I was younger. What I did take pleasure in is being with friends and going out. I got married at nineteen and started my family. Again college was far from my mind; I had small children to take care of. When I reached my 30's I longed for that education I had put off time and time again. Well here I am starting college at age 35 and I do believe that it has lots of positive aspects. I now know what I enjoy and don't enjoy. I have the work experience and life lessons to make that decision. I now am more driven and focused on my education. Personal satisfaction of being able to get in a field of my choice, not just because it's a job.

I have been in many different job settings. I have worked in fast food restaurants, a mechanic shop and in the pharmaceutical industry. What I have learned is that I love to interact and help people. I do not like a job that is not stimulating and thought provoking. I desire challenges that will keep me on my toes. I know that I can't go back to those jobs it was mentally wearing me out because they were not exciting and challenging enough. Without the experience if I had gone to college after high school I might have chosen the wrong career path.

At this time in my life I am more driven and focused or maybe a little stubborn. When I was young I had no interest in extending my education. I probably would have enrolled just to drop out because I had no drive or ambition. Being in my 30's I now know that this education is the future for me and my family, whereas before I was blind-sided by the thrill of being young and making it on my own. Life beyond my teens has taught me a lot about what should be important in my life.

Today I am my children' role-model. I am making a change to practice what I preach. I would tell my children education is everything. Knowing that I did not attend college my children would always say "why do I have to go if you didn't, you make good money without college." I always answered this with a question "why have a job you do not enjoy and look forward to and how long do you think you stand to work there?" The personal satisfaction of having a job I love is my main reason I am attending school. I want to show my children that it's never too late to make changes in life.

It has taken me eighteen years to attend college but I do not regret it, instead I am embracing it. I know what I want to do and I'm going for it. "Better late than never." My drive and focus is better now than it ever has been. I am going to make myself proud and enjoy the rest of my life in a career I love.
freezard7734 17 / 209  
Aug 28, 2010   #2
Personal satisfaction of being able to get in a field of my choice, not just because it's a job.

Hmm... This is not exactly a complete sentence. Also, it seems a little abruptly introduced into the paragraph. How about:
"Through college, I can pursue the jobs that I truly enjoy."
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Aug 30, 2010   #3
Keep those verb tenses the same:
What I did take pleasure in is was being with friends and going out.

Hmm... This is not exactly a complete sentence. Also, it seems a little abruptly introduced into the paragraph. How about:
"Through college, I can pursue the jobs that I truly enjoy."

Here, it is possible to do something that is closer to the originally intended meaning... like:
Personal satisfaction will come with entering a field of my choice rather than just having a job.

This is a good place for a semi-colon:
It has taken me eighteen years to attend college but I do not regret it; instead I am embracing it.

Talk a little about the career you are entering! Good luck...


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