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When I am challenged more, then I can work harder; TRANSFER


Shugz20 3 / 4  
Jan 3, 2014   #1
When transferring to a four year University, I will have an opportunity to be challenged more with the courses that I take. When I am challenged more, then I can work harder, and working hard can lead me to get a degree. When I have my degree, then the degree can pursue me to a good career. A kind of a career where I can help others in need; whether it is through health or education. Furthermore, my experience at Naugatuck Valley Community College was a struggle for me because I barely found any students who were committed to education like me. I think that if you find a friend who is committed to education just like you, then that friend can make a very good study group. Having good study groups is very essential because we can work as teams to help better understand a certain subject with a limited amount of time. When having many students from groups contribute to certain questions; it helps a lot because you have more than one student thinking at a time. I think that if I were to transfer to such a big community like the University of Connecticut, I will be bound to meeting a helping community. Ever since I've been volunteering at a Children School, the entire staff always worked as a team. When we went through hardships, it was always easier to solve a dilemma with a team. With this experience that I have gained from my volunteer work, I take the same mentality to school. In school, I like working as a team, helping others through situations, and working in groups to solve a problem that I may not be able to solve myself. Not only will I be challenged with the courses that can further my education, or find a helping community, but I will also be open to many options of joining activity clubs that the University of Connecticut opens to students. Naugatuck Valley Community College does meet the requirements of having many clubs for students to join. But, they don't have many health clubs as I am interested in. To be specific, University of Connecticut has a special memory loss group that I am looking forward to being part of. This group is called the Alzheimer's club. The club has involvement in walkathons, personal interaction with patients who are affected, and holding mini events to raise money. Club members also get involved by asking questions, sharing their own experiences, and an opportunity to develop friendship with the peers who are affected. I want to join this group because I personally had a distant family member who went through Alzheimer's disease. I know how important it is for the peers who are affected by it to have someone supporting them emotionally and physically. It is my dream to help others relieve their pain, and stress because I have experienced it myself through a distant family member. The University Connecticut has plentiful amount of health clubs. Health clubs such as, the auditory club, active minds club, Allied health sciences club, American heart Association, Autism speaks Club, and the Collegiate health services Corps club. Not only would I want to join the Alzheimer's club, but many other health clubs that are open to student in the University of Connecticut. I want to take full advantage of these clubs by gaining knowledge from peers and helping the peers. These are some of the main factors why I would want extend my education at the University of Connecticut.
rohan96 4 / 6  
Jan 4, 2014   #2
Having good study groups is very essential because we can work as teams to help better understand a certain subject with within a limited amount of time.

I think that if I were to transfer to such a big community likethat the University of Connecticut provides, I will ould be bound to meeting a helpingful community. ("I think the last part of the sentence needs a change. Try to make it sound different from the "helpful commmunity" thing")

Ever since I've been volunteering at a the Children School, the entire staff always has worked as a team. When we went through hardships, it was always easier to solve a dilemma with a team . Whenever we went through hardships overcoming dilemma was easier due to the presence of a team.

To be specific, University of Connecticut has a special memory loss group that I am looking forward to being part of. This group is called the Alzheimer's club.

I look forward to being a part of the Azlheimer's club at the University of Connecticut.

holding mini events to raise money.

hold events to raise money.

The University Connecticut has plentiful amount of health clubs.

I love the fact that the university has plenty of health clubs.

. Health clubs such as, the auditory club, active minds club, Allied health sciences club, American heart Association, Autism speaks Club, and the Collegiate health services Corps club

"The sentence is awkward and useless to be used."

Not only would I want to join the Alzheimer's club, but many other health clubs that are open to student in the University of Connecticut.

"Again its a bit awkward..."

I want to take full advantage of these clubs by gaining knowledge from peers and helping the peers. These are some of the main factors why I would want extend my education at the University of Connecticut.

I would take full advantage of the conducive environment that these clubs provide. To conclude I credit the above stated factors for my decision to continue my education at The University of Connecticut.


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