Please i need help with corrections where necessary. The essay is going to be a short one about 3 lines of 10cm each because i'll be writing it in an application form. Please i need your help and advise.
Here is what i was able to come ur with--
My goal is to obtain a bachelors degree from any of the above institutions and field of study. (my choice of university and field of study was filled at the top) I believe that the ABC scholarship (it is organised by an organisation) is the opportunity i have been looking for and just what i need to be successful at my goals. Vitalising the potentials in me and preparing me to face the reality of life by honouring employment according to my field, in malaysia, my home country or any where in the world which can help in the development the of the world at large.