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Business program and international setting - BU Supplement Essay


giaaahhh28 3 / 6  
Sep 30, 2012   #1
Essay 1: In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?

Ever since my mother came back from studying in Harvard for a summer business program, she had been telling me non-stop about the benefits of studying in Boston, a city so ripe with students eager to learn and a rich historic background to boot. I ventured to find out if it was as impressive as she made it out to be. It was all that she said and more, I instantly found myself wanting to study at BU the most. With its diverse population and students eager to reach their dreams I feel like it's the best place for me to grow and flourish, especially in an international setting. As a student who is highly motivated and eager to learn, I feel that BU is the best choice for me to really prepare myself to go out into the real world and give back to society.
vishnuv1228 2 / 2  
Sep 30, 2012   #2
Perhaps you could allude the specific programs that BU offers and what makes you drawn to it. Using some concrete examples will make your essay a lot better.
angela0407 3 / 19  
Oct 2, 2012   #3
Try to expand your idea on how you can contribute to BU. It's fairly important. Besides this, it's a well-written piece!

Will you see mine?Thx!
whoau49 4 / 10 1  
Oct 2, 2012   #4
I feel like your mother is the dominant speaker of this little essay. It should be, instead, begin without any preface and with why you see yourself as a good fit to BU, and then segway to much broader points


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