human values , such as worry or stress.
should be emotions
, or something of that kind.
Brave New World influenced me to value emotions as a guide to overcome difficulties and learn important lessons.
makes the topic sentence more remarkable, and throughout the second para, you better show than tell, it may seem like cliche-ridden.
the subject matter of the essay is interesting, so use better writing to make it outstanding..., like use the specifics over generalities, make better transitions, etc.
overall, the essay is pretty solid.
I asked you earlier to think about your happiest moment of your life.
something like "Now, think again about your happiest moment in life." will do better.