At the end of the year
, as part of our final grade
one of the compounds in garlic
, was the main cause (comma)
Now all we had to do was find the compound that could eliminate allicin which was a protein known as a polyphenol.
Now all we had to do was find the compound that could eliminate allicin
- a protein known as a polyphenol.
Our first step was finished, but the next posed a greater challenge
rephrase? it doesnt sound right, the first phrase.
Polyphenols did not come naturally
use a better word instead of come? it doesnt expresses your thought well.
After
some more researching, we found out casein...
we found out casein, a compound in celery
, contained polyphenols (comma)
where we had to go through various steps to find the solution
solution of what?
Throughout the project, we also made many mistakes, These mistakes developed me intellectually as I learned from them
Although we made many mistakes throughout the project, these mistakes developed me...i think you need a stronger concluding line. like, stroooong one.
please help me with mine? :