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There are a lot of reasons for 2 different sexual persons to have a decision for a wedding. All couples may look for stable work; have an immense love for both, bearing healthy, intelligent child, own a happy family. In each culture, everybody set an appropriate age norm for people to make a wedding. So do early marriage or late marriage is good and how it affects the marital life after? Let's investigate each of the issue.
We are living in 21st era, when young generation have gone very far than their old ones. Busy works and worrying of life make many peoples only focus on work and their career and only marry when they are over 30. Too late determining and does not emphasize the importance of finding darling make these people become underdogs and cannot find their suitable lover because all of "ideal lover" has been possessed by the others! Even though they have money, permanent work but it can't be exchanged for love and happiness. And more importance, late husband and wife may cause "Down syndrome" to their children, which often occurred when person are old. Studies have shown that we should marry before age of 30 to decrease percent of appearing this terrible disease to our child.
Contradictorily, the alarm of excessively early wedding is being broadcasted daily in global communications network. Early sexual relations even when being a student now is 1st concern of every parent and authorities in general. When we are too young, we have pros of keeping, binding our lover belong to us but paradoxically early marriage often lead to early divorce. The reasons are young lover usually not have enough money, or chance to advance vocation and developing talents and instead of study at school, they leave it and work at factories, restaurants... to pay off everyday needs. Interrupted education cannot ensure a full and happy life and future. The second reason is adolescents do not have enough sufficient experiences, maturity and well preparations for wedding. The more youthful couples, the more divorces happen.
After thinking, comparing carefully two circumstances, I make up my mind that marrying too early or too late are both not good. My parents married at ages 27, when they had well-educated, had a good job and colorful future, they have been very happy. This example is like many examples lead me to a conclusion to marry at the age from 22 to 28. I think it's proper and accepted in almost society in the world.
