With the scores I had, I could not get into the universities or colleges I wanted to get into at first.
With the scores I had, I could not get into the universities or colleges I wanted to get into
at first .
Instead of going about things the usual way, finishing it quickly and tying it with a bow tie
(You wear bow ties on your neck)
Instead of going about things the usual way, finishing it quickly and tying it
with a bow tie up with a bow.
I looked at each problem, I started with the basics of each problem, I worked towards the top
I looked at each problem, started with the basics of each problem and worked towards the top
I saw that if you fail at something or make a mistake does not mean you are inherently bad at it,
I saw that if you fail at something or make a mistake it does not mean you are inherently bad at it,
But otherwise a very good essay. Hope this helps.