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Accounting is part of human's everyday life; Masters-Personal Statement


dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 14, 2013   #1
I am applying for master in accounting and management and been asked to make a personal statement. here is it. i need your remarks for improvement. Thanks

Accountancy and management are developing and providing a wide range of career opportunities full of challenges for graduate's students studying this field. Now graduate's students of management and accounting need to learn how to be fluid and flexible to make a successful career. In order to achieve that, strengthen their different accountancy's as well as management skills and knowledge is mandatory.

It is in this context,I've decided to apply to M.s.c Accounting and Management because I believe, it is the right program for me as I want to do career in this field and I am pretty sure that this program will equip me with lot of tools and skills required to do so. In addition, through this program I will have the chance sink into the world of economy and profit of the high demand that is there currently for management and accounting graduates in the jobs market. On the top of this, I have always been fascinated by how Accountancy and management can collaborate to lead a business to success or failure. Furthermore, it is the ability we gain to guide and help customers become more profitable hopefully that even attract me more. By the same token, I always get excited when I solve an accounting problem or successfully balance an account. The courses in business management and management accounting helped me set new goals for myself and dream big.

As far as my personal experiences are concerned, they led to me have patience, self-emotion control as well as realize the importance of listening, respecting the opinions of others and the significance of being versatile. Being an independent person, I believe that my strongest strengths are the abilities to work under a deadline pressure and deliver the expected results quickly, accurately and be self-motivated with the saying "if you give once it will be a habit, give up should not an option don't give up" from Michael Jordan in head.

In problem-solving situation, I have a tireless eye for details and analyze the problem through several techniques before making any major decision. Skills, I think are necessary to make career in both fields of management and accounting.

At college, I did a project work in the last year of my degree program entitled "Working capital management at HMT (INDIA)".The help of the company's financial officer in collecting and analyzing data gave me more insights of accountancy,

I realized that if I want to do career in this field, a deeper knowledge and strengthening skills are unconditional. This project was a catalyst in the decision of taking my knowledge of accountancy to the next level and follows a career in this domain. More it helps me develop skills like group works and collaboration.

Recently, I had an intern for an Immigration company called Mercan Capital Limited in India, which provided me with in-depth understanding of management uses and its principles. My responsibilities were to teach French, advise and guide workers wishing to settle in Quebec. During this internship I developed skills in motivating, advising people and also it has also improved my communications skills and sense of planning and organizing.

I genuinely possess a passion for management and accounting and have a keen interest in knowing what is happening in the business environment as a whole. I believe that my personal attributes, academic achievements and relevant work experience make me a suitable candidate for course. Another significant factor is that, I am a highly sociable person full of interpersonal skills,open-minded, always happy to meet new persons and who strictly respect the set rules and regulations. More I am person who is always ready to part of students and community events, as I believe through that way I can contribute in my way in creating and promoting a healthy and better student environment.

Overall, I see myself as am a set goals achieved-driven person, full of commitment, hardworking and who can turn difficult challenges into a source of opportunities and gain personal profit from them. Enrolling on the university degree of management and accounting is just the beginning for me, I aspire to achieve more in years to come starting with becoming senior manager or manager and accountant in a corporate and on longer term establish my own business corporation. Undoubtedly, if I get admitted at your university I will prove myself as a dedicated, role model student who will make a every work and teaching session counts and will extensively take part of them in order to obtain the maximum knowledge from them.
temptprovidence 8 / 163 35  
Mar 14, 2013   #2
All over the globe disregard of languages or cultures,

apart from ...
you can use much better than this as well

that was good and very legible to understand.. you used the correct amount of vocabulary and points. you still can go for improvements for a good expression and making it a catching one for the institution to let you in as easily... you must try to make it a more bit shorter.:)
OP dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 14, 2013   #3
temptprovidence
Really thank you for yor remarks and time..it means a lot to me..but ihave a question..when you say improvements in expressions...could you please me some tips..or advice.. thank you
temptprovidence 8 / 163 35  
Mar 14, 2013   #4
i mean the better use of idioms, proverbs and other such things to make it impressive... :)
OP dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 15, 2013   #5
@Didgeridoo : I truly can't thank you enough for your remarks and even questions asked...really thank you. : Why have i taken the management field after the high school degree in Literature

? First,because of my brother who explained me the wide range of opportunities that exist throughout the world for business management students (an element i would like to include but

don't know if i should.
) and also he influenced me a lot as himself was studying marketing and was really impressed about the way he was explaining to me how company do their business and

sell their products.(This is a part i would like to include in the personal statement but don't know if i should .)

And for the Internship : i am still taking the internship till this date...that's why i said : has helped .. the bachelor i completed 4 months ago..that why i said the letter : received.
Didgeridoo - / 306 191  
Mar 24, 2013   #6
Honestly, I like your first personal statement a lot more than I like this one. You spend a lot of this essay "describing yourself" to readers, but you never back up what you are saying with any examples. Anyone can say they are committed and hard-working or that they are dedicated to the community. What have you done in high school that shows these things?
morenikky1 - / 2  
Mar 24, 2013   #7
Am new here and would like to know if I have to read and edit at the same time post in the forum. Or if I could copy and paste, edit, then post the edited version.

The first paragraph: "I have decided to apply to Msc Accounting and Management because I want to do career in this field and I am pretty sure that this program will equip me with lot of tools and skills required to do so."

I have applied for a Masters degree (MSc) in Accounting and Management because, I want to pursue a career in that field. I am certain it will equip me with the skills required to excel in that field".
OP dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 24, 2013   #8
@morenikky1: you can copy and paste and edit, post the edited version...anything will help man...any remarks or proposed sentences will be welcome..thanks in advances
OP dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 24, 2013   #9
@didgeridoo: thank you for help..you are a nice, your comments are really helping me... i will work again on it and try to incorporate what you just mention..some times i want to incorporate some elements like to basket ball competition i took part of..but hesitant cause i trying not to make to personal and a bit shorter...but remarks are truly helpful...

Thank you again..
OP dosolearner 1 / 6 1  
Mar 24, 2013   #11
@morenikky1: really thank you again for taking your time to help with my personal statement..means a lot.


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