"When you desire something.." - prompt#1 the world ex. family, community or school
Undergraduatemrtnz22 - Nov 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 6, 2009
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"True love" - UC undergrad admission personal statement
Undergraduateumrily181 - Nov 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 6, 2009
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Undergraduate Admissions Essay SCAD Savannah BFA Arch
Undergraduatepreciouslady - Nov 5, 2009 / ivyeyesediting - Nov 6, 2009
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"I crave organization" - Application Essay Edits/ Suggestion
Undergraduatemedelman2010 - Nov 3, 2009 / abutler5 - Nov 6, 2009
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'Not an artist myself' - Stanford A Good Place For You (many opportunities)
UndergraduateFiddysin - Nov 2, 2009 / Fiddysin - Nov 5, 2009
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(Answered prompt correctly?) - University of Michigan Diversity Essay
Undergraduatelalalololala - Nov 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 5, 2009
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My positive attitude ; University of Wisconsin-Madison Statements
UndergraduateStPFisher - Oct 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 5, 2009
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"Surviving from Depression" UF prompt
Undergraduatekayyao - Oct 31, 2009 / kayyao - Nov 5, 2009
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Hard work and dedication for my future: PROFESSIONAL GOALS
Undergraduatephhusm2000 - Nov 3, 2009 / phhusm2000 - Nov 5, 2009
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Interest in Math and Science - California Institute of Technology
UndergraduateMayada - Nov 2, 2009 / Haru0422KR - Nov 5, 2009
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Rape as a topic?
Undergraduaterollerderby - Nov 1, 2009 / angelica0716 - Nov 5, 2009
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"My fear of time" - Describe a Significant Moment In Your Life
UndergraduateSilentSoliloquy - Nov 3, 2009 / ivyeyesediting - Nov 5, 2009
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Page 271 of my autobiography "This bus ride is about remembering"
Undergraduatetofued - Oct 31, 2009 / abutler5 - Nov 5, 2009
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UF Admissions Essay- continuity and grammar questions..
Undergraduatejwatson - Nov 1, 2009 / abutler5 - Nov 5, 2009
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"no sense of diversity" - My Rutgers Essay
Undergraduatepalakpatel1992 - Nov 2, 2009 / Moonshadow0302 - Nov 5, 2009
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MY DREAM TO BECOME A BALLERINA AND OVERCOME BEING SHY UCLA PROMPT 2
Undergraduateshadejade - Oct 31, 2009 / shadejade - Nov 5, 2009
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"the Kingdom of Bhutan" - COMMON APP ESSAY, CHECK
Undergraduaterechungp - Nov 3, 2009 / Moonshadow0302 - Nov 5, 2009
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An essay that will touch the bottom of your heart. See if you agree...
Undergraduateasiangirl - Nov 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 5, 2009
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"stress and dermatitis" UC prompt 1
Undergraduatebbventura - Nov 4, 2009 / Liebe - Nov 5, 2009
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UT App Essay B obesity
Undergraduatezbennett10 - Nov 4, 2009 / zbennett10 - Nov 5, 2009
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I have always been jealous of those who had a definite goal in life; Carnegie Mellon
Undergraduateswingstyle - Oct 27, 2009 / linmark - Nov 5, 2009
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leadership and team working skills, why they must choose me?
UndergraduateLightman - Oct 31, 2009 / Lightman - Nov 5, 2009
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UC Prompt #2 - my experience in raising a baby
Undergraduatetheasianlance - Nov 2, 2009 / simonma668 - Nov 5, 2009
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Love of Programming and UCs
UndergraduateKerfuffin - Oct 17, 2009 / simonma668 - Nov 5, 2009
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UC Prompt 2 : Simply saying "No."
Undergraduatefendij3 - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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A second chance to so something differently - personal statement
Undergraduatelitingjiao - Oct 26, 2009 / Mustafa1991 - Nov 4, 2009
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Why Stanford? Hope to get some suggestions.
Undergraduatedanielnfls - Nov 4, 2009 / danielnfls - Nov 4, 2009
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Extracurricular activity elaboration--"Project Green"
Undergraduateebby2010 - Oct 24, 2009 / ebby2010 - Nov 4, 2009
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Aviation - Essay question for a job? I enjoy flying. I am a student pilot.
UndergraduateCamodan - Nov 2, 2009 / zebrasapien - Nov 4, 2009
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Exposed to many different types of characters, with each, lived a different life. World, Aspirations
Undergraduateboogerface - Nov 2, 2009 / bbventura - Nov 4, 2009
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SOP for psychology program
Undergraduatesimplemoment - Nov 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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'Aunt's cancer..' - Concise Narrative: Entrance Essay for UF
Undergraduateamramey - Nov 3, 2009 / amramey - Nov 4, 2009
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proper paragraph formatting for application essays
Undergraduatecasman - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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"It's a Sign" + " Artistic Interpretation"
UndergraduateNinja - Oct 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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'They loved it and recommended it' Why are you considering the ohio state university?
Undergraduateosu2010 - Nov 3, 2009 / osu2010 - Nov 4, 2009
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International trip alone?
Undergraduatecolorfuloving - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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U of M-My biggest setback essay
Undergraduatedaisy1991 - Oct 29, 2009 / prompter - Nov 4, 2009
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What I Did When I Ran Away From Home
UndergraduateAwreccan - Oct 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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UC #1 Family influence: Bioengineering
Undergraduateowlcity24 - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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Common App Short Answer - Working at A&F - criticism welcome!
Undergraduatemattsaysfierce - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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Stanford Supplement Essay: Personal Narrative on career decision
Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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Obsession with time - Stanford Roomate short essay response
Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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"My Mission Trip" - UF prompt
Undergraduatelilminkzmayb - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
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essay on Scuba Diving(rough): Common App Essay
Undergraduatepeekachoo - Oct 24, 2009 / redsox34 - Nov 4, 2009
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"More than meets the eye" - essay for Chicago U.
Undergraduatelisandrag - Nov 1, 2009 / Liebe - Nov 4, 2009
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I was going to be alone for most of the summer; Significant life experience
Undergraduatethebabybull - Nov 4, 2009 / ivyeyesediting - Nov 4, 2009
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Life goals from a liberal arts education
Undergraduatemichiganmaniac8 - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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'Project WORTHY'. I need to cut some of this UIUC essay down, can you help?
Undergraduateanuj1450 - Nov 1, 2009 / Mustafa1991 - Nov 3, 2009
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Chinese Chess - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay. Currently overlength )):
Undergraduatezhangyitao - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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"what to gain from diversity"-UM prompt 2
Undergraduatebmore1991 - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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I saw that dual potential in National Art Honor Society (NAHS) ; extracurricular
Undergraduate10healyc - Nov 3, 2009 / theplaniverse - Nov 3, 2009
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Basketball has become an indispensable part of my life - Common app short essay
Undergraduatetrung2012 - Nov 1, 2009 / trung2012 - Nov 3, 2009
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My Cello - playing on it is my most challenging, but most rewarding personal activity.
Undergraduatebyflash - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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World of knowledge, digital art
Undergraduatehdirt1 - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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Bringing attributes of Determination and time management to UF
Undergraduatepenutsmurf - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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Two Statements - life experiences, perspectives, talents, commitments
Undergraduateohmygoodness - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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Common Application Volleyball essay; My family is notoriously terrible at sports
Undergraduatesmallfry320 - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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'Immigrant to the United States'; I did my best to avoid alienating from my American peers
Undergraduatemadmadiah - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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Diversity Essay-Illustrating the value of diversity in my life.
Undergraduateperejdam - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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Common App Essay: Choose your own topic: Poker as a conceit to life
Undergraduated3adma - Nov 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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