I'm going to be honest here and say that it's good for first draft. It has some personalized factors and it is able to conveyed the points and the main ideas across, which is good. The only thing that doesn't settle very well is the issue with organization of your main ideas/paragraphs. The organization is a bit choppy, it doesn't have much flow and main ideas seemed loosely connected. Perhaps work on the transitioning, maybe a sentence at the end of each paragraph, to better transition from one idea to another.
I never want to have to go through this type of situation again.The Drug Court Program constantly reminds me of the mistake I made
These two sentences are just poping out there. They seemed disconnected and would be better if you elaborate more about them individually.
Currently, I have a side business repairing computers, "jailbreaking" iPhones, and creating websites.
I'm glad you concluded specific examples, but "jailbreaking" iPhones doesn't sound like a reformed convict. Just convict.
I absolutely love your usage of "health enthusiast," it sounded perfect for displaying a positive image.
Overall this is a good start. Just a little more transitions and better elaboration and I think you have something pretty good on your hand.
If I offended you at any point, then I'm sorry. Just trying to be of help.