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whether a big university or a small colleges - speech correction


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Feb 7, 2012, 08:00am   #1
Topic is about advantages of studying in small colleges:

You are wondering either apply into large college or small college for your studying? In my opinion, small colleges are better for you your choice. There are some reasons why I have to say that. Firstly may be small colleges don't have many majors for students to choose(or don't offer many majors), but they bring to students many hands-on learning oportunities, focus on students' future careers.Secondly,some of big colleges, you may have atracted with their faculties as well-stocked libraries, updated fatilities...but find out that how many times which you are taughted by professors or teaching assistants? However, in small colleges, you are usually taughted by professors, not teaching assistants. Because of small classizes, professor can ease remember all his or her students name, even their interests. Moreover, in small colleges, you will make friend with the others easier than large colleges, also you will find robust social life at here. Therefore, before entering whether a big university or a small colleges, looking up carefully and see what is the most important to you.

You are wondering either apply into large college or small college for your studying whether to study in a large or a small college? In my opinion, small colleges are a better for you your choice. There are some reasons why I have to say that.

Firstly may be small colleges don't have many majors for students to choose(or don't offer many majors), but they bring to students many hands-on learning oportunities, focus on students' future careers. [font#008000](I think you should rephrase the sentence cuz it seems like there aren't many majors, thus limiting one's scope)

Secondly,some .......

I think the sentences are a little disconnected. Stick to the same points or you could add a couple of them, but try rephrasing the para from the beginning...

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