Hi.
I think overall this is an excellent speech. You have talked about everything that is meaningful to you without much adjectives or empty sentences. Good job!
My dad passed away earlier this year, on February 10, 2010 due to an infection in his blood during while bring in the hospital.
It is only 2 days away from my birthday when he passed away. I am really sorry that this has happen.
My dad was 62 when he passed away, only a couple of months short of turning 63. I am a well-rounded person. I love to play the sports, including soccer, tennis, basketball, and football.
This transition is really subtle; just in the previous sentence, you talked about your father passing away. You have changed not only the tone, but also the subject, and this makes you speech sound strange. Instead, you can add a sentence in between to connect the subjects better.
My dad was 62 when he passed away, only a couple of months short of turning 63. Despite that, I am still passionate about the things I loved (or something). I am a well-rounded person. I love to play the sports, including soccer, tennis, basketball, and football.
The conclusion is pretty kewl!
G L~