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Aug 14, 2010, 03:10pm   #1
Hi friends,

This is a speech soon to be dictated for the commencement of a new branch of the existing consultancy. Please help me with grammers, sentence usage, all sorts of corrections to make it effective

thank you


As a team of highly motivated and experienced professionals in the field of education, IEC has been provding quality services to its students wishing to carry on their further eduaction abroad and helping them to earn a good living .

Established in 2007 BC, IEC has been working with its main branch office located at new baneshwor on the way to sankhamul.

To meet the growing needs and demands of our customers, We are now proud to announce the commencement of our new branch which will be located in the same place about 200 metres away from the main office.

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As a The team of highly motivated and experienced professionals in the field of education at IEC has been provding quality services to its students who wishing to carry on further their eduaction abroad and has been helping these individuals succeed in to earning a good living .

Since its establishment in 2007 BCBC? like the "before christ, anno domini" thing?, IEC has been working with its main branch office located at new baneshwor on the way to sankhamul.

To meet the growing needs and demands of our customers, We are now proud to announce the commencement of our new branch which will be located in the same place You should state the name of the location about 200 metres away from the main office.

The new branch will house classes, ccomputer labs, individual counselling labs, waiting room, library to meet the physical needs and demands of our studdents.( plz addd some more details of the features of the new branch)I don't know the specifics of the new branch but if you want to expand this part you can always write a sentence about each thing you already mentioned, like
The new classes in this branch will...
The new computer labs will similarly...
The new individual counseling labs will allow...
The new library will...
And even the waiting room will...
...just to name a few of the features



As of now, we have been successful in sending our students to countries includding the us, uk, australia, switzerland, canada, and ireland while we havebeen in addition to provide consulting to students who wishing to study abroad in EU countries including cyprus, poland hungary malta belgium france denmark, and india.

With a vision to of
making
our services available to places inside and outsid
e the nation, We have already opened our brances in some cities in India and soon we seek to expand our serivces to even more countries and places

In order to expand our services within and outside the coutry, curretyl we house our facilities in two places and have agreements with different consultancies in India. Soon, we will be tieing up with _____________________ in the UK .

Apart from that we are also starting to provide migration consulation for people wishing to stay abroad

Similarly, we are starting to work on collborate with some cooperatives and finanical sectors and operate an agency to provide education loans for needy students. IES has been providing test preparation classses for IELTS, IBT, GRE, GMAT through our qulaified lecturers who are
native american english speakers. In addition, we have been provided language classes in english, french, german, japanese and different computer classes.

Along with that, we have been providing visa preparation classes, proper documentations, opportunity for students to choose their own institution and forawrd the application process, pre departure informatons, as weel as in some cases airport pick up a and arrangment of accomodation.

In addition to that, we have also been providing visa preparation classes, instruction on obtaining proper documentation, opportunities for choosing institutions and forwarding applicants, pre-departure information, and, sometimes, airport pick up and arrangement of accomodations.


It has recently expanded its services, to now include engineering and medical preparation classes through qualified professionals. Also +2 preparation classes and nurning entrance

The IEC has recently expanded its services to include engineering and medical preparation classes taught by qualified professionals, two new preparation classes, and nursing entrance classes.

In a timely basis, we have provide college echibitions and direct spot admission facilities. Students get to meet represeatives andd get all the information they need. interest in pursuing nursin in ik canada usa healthcare we provide proper consulations

In a timely manner, we have hosted college exhibitions and direct spot admission facilities. Through these programs, students are able to meet representatives and acqure much information. For those interested in pursuing nursing in the UK, Canada, and USA healthcare fields, we are able to provide respective consultation.

More importantly for students seeking to earn an undergrautae graduta aor post gradaute degree aborad we shoose affordable colleges and univversityes, our primary focu is on fast admission as well as i20 successful documention fast track offer letter along with scolarship and assisteships Within a short span of time we have reached a significant height And this goes with your faith in us.

Most importantly, for students seeking undergraduate, graduate, or post-graduate degrees abroad,
after choosing affordable colleges and universities, our primary focus is on fast admission as well as i20 successful documentation fast track offer letters, scholarships, and internships. Within a short span of time, we have acheived significant success thanks to your faith in us.


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random123:
To meet the growing needs and demands of our customers, We are ... the main office.

Here is an unnecessarily capitalized w.

'timely basis'--- in not correct, but I see that Yayz provided a solution. Notice also the misspellings she corrected and that a period is necessary at the end of this sentence:
In a timely basis, we have provided college....

Please make the corrections suggested by Yayz and post a new draft. That way, we can search for any errors that you still may have.

Thanks, Maria, for all the time you spent here!
Aug 16, 2010, 05:13pm   #4
ok i made the necessary corrections. Plz correct me now.

As a team of highly motivated and experienced professionals in the field of education,
IEC has been providing quality services to students wishing to further their education
abroad and has been helping them succeed in earning a good living.

Since its establishment in 2007 BC, IEC has been working with its main branch
office located at New Baneshwor on the way to Sankhamul and within the short
span of its establishment it has garnered significant success. The demands have grown.

To meet the growing needs and demands of our customers, we are now proud to
announce the commencement of our new branch which will be located in new baneshwor
about 200 m away from the main office.

The new branch will house classes, computer labs, individual counselling labs
waiting rooms, libraries, to meet the physical needs and demands of our students.

(some description of the facilities the new branch will house)

As of now, we have been successful in sending our students to countries including
the US, UK, Australia, Switzerland, Canada and Ireland at the same time have been providing consultations to students who wish to study abroad in EU countries including Cyprus, Poland, Hungary
Malta belgium france denmark and India.

With a vision of making our services available to places inside and outside the nation
we have already opened brances in India and seek to expand our services to even more counties
Soon, we will be tieing up with the __________________in the UK

Similarly we are collaborating with some co operatives and financial
sectors and operate an agency to provide education loans for needy students.

IES has been providing test prep classes for IELTS, GRE, GMAT through our qualified lecturers who are
native english speakers. In addition, we have been provided language classes in english, french, german, japanese and different computer classes.

In addition to that, we have also been providing visa preparation classes, instruction
on obtaining proper documentation, opportunities for choosing institutions and forwarding
applicants, pre-departure information, and, sometimes, airport pick up and
arrangement of accomodations.

The IEC has recently expanded its services to include engineering and medical
preparation classes taught by qualified professionals, two new preparation classes,
and nursing entrance classes.

On a timely basis, we have hosted college exhibitions and direct spot admission facilities.
Through these programs, students are able to meet representatives and acqure
much information. For those interested in pursuing nursing in the UK, Canada,
and USA healthcare fields, we are able to provide respective consultation


Most importantly, for students seeking undergraduate, graduate, or post-graduate degrees abroad,
after choosing affordable colleges and universities, our primary focus is on fast admission, successful
documentation fast track offer letters, scholarships, and internships.
EF_Kevin:
random123:
The demands have grown.

Can you be more specific with this sentence?

I'm tempted to answer provide suggestions for that.

random123:
Canada and Ireland at the same time have been providing consultations

Ireland and at the
Ireland. At the same time we have also

IELTS, GRE, and GMAT

random123:
we have been providing? language


random123:
forwarding
applicants

Do you mean applications?

EF_Kevin:
Is a comma missing here?---...successful documentation fast track offer letters, scholarships, and internships.--- what does the red part mean?

Could it be an "of" or "for"? ...yeah, depends on what it means.

This is definitely pretty great! You've composed quite a speech =)



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