Introducing my self at a job interview; Speech Writing

hi all ,
I'm Ahmed El-Waseif ,i'm Egyptian from Mansoura , i'm 25 years old , single . About my family background, my father is an accountant in Egyptian electricity transmission company and also my mother is working as accountant in ministry of youth and sport . I've one brother and one sister both older than me .i completed my Bacelor of commerce from Mansoura university accounting depatment at 2011 , grade good . plus the courses which i got during my study period such as ICDL v-5 , Excel accounting , bookkeeping and systamic preparation of final accounts and general english courses made me qualified to work in "El-Safa" company for transport and shipping as an accountant , then i found myelf well trained to join "Tarek Mansour" auditing and accounting office . i got alot of experience from this accounting office because i worked on various accounting software , preparation and review daily constraints , registeration on different account books and preparation of inventory adjustments . my long term goal is to be the best accountant in a good reuted company who all rely upon .my strenghts are never keep trying , honest , hard worker and being easy going . my hobbies are going to gym , playing billiards and watching movies . that's all about me . thank you

A lot of grammatical mistakes.


should be Bachelors and so on and so far. Fix the grammatical mistakes before posting.

If you are the job seeker, you generally tend to respect the interviewing panel. So, "hi all" is not really appropriate in this case. " you should try something like, Good morning Sir!


It's nice to make a general statement about your fsmily background. Something like -
I come from a middle class family