The speech should be catchy, perhaps amusing, but always thought-provoking.
This is a very well-constructed sentence!
This is a run-on sentence:
You have written your speech, now you must practice in order to ensure its smooth delivery.
You can fix it like this:
After you have written your speech,
now you must practice in order to ensure its smooth delivery.
There is no need for the capital S in this sentence (in Sets):
When you are standing n front of a group, with several
Set sets of eyes focused on you, it's
the a good time to wear nice clothing.
This is very nicely written!
But you are right about the last paragraph. It is only about the outline, but it should be about the main idea of the whole essay.
Write a conclusion paragraph that
answers those questions you ask in the introduction. I think that would make a great conclusion paragraph.
:-)