Shanni Lam
Clara Barton School
What the American Flag Means to Me
What does the American flag really mean? Some call it Old Glory; others call it the Star Spangled Banner. In my opinion, it symbolizes opportunity, hope, justice, and freedom. Our country has so many freedoms that other countries do not have, such as the freedom to vote for all colors and men and women, freedom of speech, and so many more! We are so lucky to have these rights when many other countries are still fighting for it. I am beginning to believe that our citizens are forgetting how lucky we are to live here. They are unaware of all the advantages and privileges we have that other countries do not have.
Two decades ago, my parents immigrated to the United States from Asia for new opportunities. They thought America was a great place for more opportunities to have a better future and more freedoms. Every time I see the American flag, I cannot help but think if it were not for the freedoms of the United States, how life would be different for my family and I. Without the move, I would not be living the life I have today. Needless to say, the American flag has a huge impact on my life; I feel an intense emotional attachment between my country, its flag and me. As a citizen of the United States, not appreciating our country and the flag would be a strong insult to this wonderful country I live in.
Old Glory consists of three colors: red, blue, and white. Red represents the bloodshed from the bravery of our soldiers, who were willing to sacrifice their lives in order for us to give others a free life. Blue represents the sky; it reminds us to set our goals high as anything is possible and to reach higher and higher to achieve them. The sky is the limit. Last, but not least, white represents purity. It is not our country that is pure, but the people inside it. We, the people, are pure because we always believe in ourselves and are always willing to lend a hand to help others in need. For example, during the earthquake of Haiti, Americans donated much of their money even though the economy was struggling. Wherever and whenever a disaster strikes, America is always the first and most helpful to the country.
The Star Spangled Banner has thirteen stripes, since there were thirteen original colonies: Delaware, Pennsylvania, New Jersey, Georgia, Connecticut, Massachusetts, Maryland, South Carolina, New Hampshire, Virginia, New York, North Carolina, and Rhode Island. Seven stripes are red; six stripes are white, each alternating turns in order: red, white, red, white, red, white... In the top left corner, is a small, blue rectangle with fifty white stars, representing the fifty states that make us the country we know today.
Red and blue also represents racial discrimination since they are exact opposites. There was a time when our country would not treat African-Americans/blacks just as fairly as the whites. Without the Civil War, today, we may not be able to play with our friends just because they were a different skin color! At the same time, the Union was divided into two. Nowadays, we are united under one nation, enjoying our freedom together. The Civil War is a symbol of justice bringing our nation back to one, united, as it always should have been. The American Flag is a reminder that our nation will always be united.
In conclusion, I am proud to be an American citizen and always will be. I am especially grateful for all the freedoms and privileges the United States has to offer. Americans are forgetting how lucky we are and the American Flag is a reminder of all the privileges we have. We should respect the flag as it represents the country we live in. When I see the American flag, I hold it in my heart and it reminds me to believe in myself.
Our countrymenhas so many freedomsenjoy more freedomthan the people live in other countries do not have , such as we enjoy the freedom of speech, (i brought it forward as this is them most important of all) freedom to vote for all colors and men and women without any discremination on race or gender, freedom of speech , and so many more! We are so lucky to have these rights when people of many other countries are still fighting for itthem .
I am beginning to believe that our citizens are forgetting how lucky we are to live here. They are unaware of all the advantages and privileges we have that other countries do not have. ------------- This sounds repetitive. You have already said this in your pervious sentence.
Two decades ago, my parents immigrated to the United States from Asia seekingfor new opportunities. They thought America was a great place forwith more opportunities and freedom to have a better future and more freedoms . ----------------------- I think you dont convince the reader enough about why you say America is a better place in terms of freedom compared to other parts of the world. You have to support your argument with reasons and examples. That is the area you need to pay attention in your essay.
