Presentation about a person I admire

Hi... i have to do a presentation about the person i admire for 2 1/2 minutes.
I have worked out a little and would like to get an opinion on it.

Today i'm going to talk about a person whom i admire. I worked in a business process outsourcing company which is a subsidiary of a group of companies, and my CEO there was Mr. Habib (MBA). He is a honest and hardworking person who ended up as a CEO in his early 20's and he is the youngest CEO whom i've ever met. He's a person who can easily get along with everyone and get all the works done without hurting anyone. He always see how a thing will affect in the future and according to that makes his decisions and move on. He showed me how to work under pressure and handle the critical situations effectively. I've learnt to respect other people's opinion and how to taggle with diffrent people smoothly in the organisation. He is a kind of person whom everyone like to be work under him happily. I always admire him for his hardworking and the achievements he made.

Greetings!

I think you have a good start here. It could be even better if you were to relate a specific incident as an example of how well Mr. Habib handled situations. Can you think of a particular occasion that stands out in your mind?

Here are some editing tips:

He is an honest and hardworking person

He's a person who can easily get along with everyone and get all the work done without hurting anyone. He always see how a thing will affect [delete "in"] the future and according to that makes his decisions, and then moves on.

I've learnt to respect other people's opinions and how to taggle [taggle is not a word; do you mean how to get along with?] with different people smoothly in the organisation. He is the kind of person whom everyone can work under happily. I always admired him for his hard work and the achievements he made.

Best of luck in your studies!

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com

Can I have a longer essay about this topic?
I need to present out in 5 minutes,so the essay maybe included of 200 words.
Thank you for your helping!^o^

Greetings!

We are happy to help with editing your essay, or to give you ideas, but it sounds like you are wanting someone to write your essay for you, and we don't do that on this site.

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com