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My volunteer-mindedness that I have done during my high school life - APU scholarship essay


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Feb 3, 2015   #1
topic : Please write about any previous commendable experiences, any extracurricular activities you hope to pursue after you have to entered the university, and your plans after graduation from APU

answer: If I have to talk about my previous commendable experiences, I will talk about my volunteer-mindedness that I have done during my high school life. Volunteer-mindedness activities are not only for donate money, appliances or food but the main aims is to donate happiness for other people.

When I studied on grade 11 and I have an impress volunteer-mindedness activity because I have been involved in the donation and entertainment part. For donation, my friends and I made a fresh vegetable rice sheet rolls and brownie for sell at Train market. After we get money, we separate it into two groups. First group is to donate to a foundation and second group is for buy foods, snacks, drinks and necessary appliances for old people. For entertainment, I have been one of MC on that day and I perform a drama of " Rang Ngao" (it is a story of two twin. The story begins when one of them died because of love issue. So, another one angry and revenge another people who make her sister died). Moreover, I prepare musical chairs and karaoke corner for old people to sing old songs with us. All activities that I have been a part of it make me impress of myself that I can make other people laugh with my jokes. I can make old people smile. I learn to give happiness to other people and I also receive happiness from what I have done too.

There are many activities that I hope to pursue after I have attended APU. Firstly, I want to participate in Thai festival. It is an activity, not to mention because it is very famous for Thai students who want to study here. What I want to do in Thai festival is sell Thai foods and show folks of each sector in Thailand to foreigners to see the beauty of Thais culture. In the aspect of Thai cooking, I don't want to cook for sale only but I want to show that we attention and care to each step every much. In the part of Thai folks of each sectors, most of foreigners they will know only Songkran festival but they never know about folks of Thailand that we have horse stable grass which is a folks of the north part of Thailand that also popular and enjoyable. Moreover, we have a wheelbarrow race that is a folk of the northwest part pf Thailand. In Thai festival, I want all of my foreign friends to know more and more about Thai tradition and culture. Secondly, I want to join a drama club of the university. The reason is that I have join school's performances every year. So, it makes me interested performances. Furthermore, I want to develop my potential for me to be a better people and more confident of myself. Lastly, I want to make an activity of exchange languages between mine and my friend's language by use English in teaching. For example, I teach Thai language to my Japanese friends and my friends also teach me a Japanese language and we use English in teaching. So, I think this activity will make my friends and I can improve English skill and other languages. In addition, this activity will make more friends too.

There are numerous things that I plan after graduate from APU. Firstly, I plan for my career. After I graduate I desire to have a job that directly use language and use it all the time. For example, cabin crew because they use language all the time and they have a chance to meet a lot of people. So, I think that cabin crew is jobs that will make me use everything that I have learn from the university. Secondly, I plan to continue study Master degree in a major of IBM (International Business Machines Corporation) . For the reason that I choose IBM, I have learned about International Business on the occasion of I studied at high school so, it makes me interested about Business. Moreover, I learn about languages on bachelor degree so, I think that if I study IBM , I will find a various job and make a benefit for me in the future.

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digaprasiska 10 / 27 6  
Feb 3, 2015   #2
Hi superp...

i am not an expert essay writer because we are alike. I also need help to correct my essay or scholarship application and luckily someone gave me advice.

I have read your essay but i am sorry I didn't find out connection between your volunteer experience with your major about international business. I mean its not always about business but you must put a highlight in your volunteer activity that will be relevant with your major in university, its not the main but it will help to impress the judges.

Judges will read ton of applications and they will sort it in very simple way. your first sentences or paragraph must be really interesting for them. Find out what the main purpose of APU scholarship will help to impress judge if you can put on your essay application.

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