ohitstanya 1 / 1 Aug 28, 2011 #1I'll be turning in an essay for my scholarship grant for college.I hope that you could actually help me edit some stuffs you know."Always do your best. What you plant now, you will harvest later". That quote is undoubtedly true.When I was young, I would come up with some business ideas and I'd asked my friends to help me accomplish it. I also help my parents with our small business. Through the years, I have been interested in doing business. Gradually, I realized that I want to be part of the actual business world someday. I had Entrepreneurship classes before and last year I had Business Management as a part of our school's curriculum; I even top my Business Management class for straight four quarters. The experiences that I had with my Entrepreneurship and Business Management class cultivated my passion for having a career in the field of Business. Essentially, I firmly believe that I have the courage and passion to pursue the career that I want.Moreover, through some career and school searching, I was able to learn about Enderun Colleges. Ever since, I've learned about it, attending Enderun has been my fondest dream. I'd love to experience the high-quality curriculum system of Enderun and its Exceptional facilities and top calibre faculty.Becoming part of the Enderun community is surely a great honor. I can assure you that I have what it takes to be an Enderun student and not just an ordinary student but rather a well rounded individual. As far as I know myself, I am a diligent and motivated individual with fine goals. Based from my experiences, I can balance my academics and extracurricular activities. Within me lies a good leadership skill too. If granted, the scholarship will give me an opportunity to further my education without having to worry so much about finances and especially take a step closer to success. I will make the best use of the scholarship to succeed in garnering a capacious array of knowledge and endeavour to become a beacon of edification to our society."Therefore, I am worthy of this because I am an oustanding person who contains all the qualities a scholarship student should posess."
OP ohitstanya 1 / 1 Aug 29, 2011 #2it's actually longer than what is asked. the essay should be 300 words or less. I still have to shorten it. :) but, thanks!@ MAIThank you! I really appreciate it :) By the way, should desire be desired?Thanks!