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Receiving a scholarship would give me an opportunity to attend FFA. I'm interested in this school because
I feel FFA will provide the best environment for academic growth. I feel
the academic programs offered here will greatly prepare me for
realizing my current career goal of family medicine. Being able to study at
FFA will provide me better college opportunities and excellence
in writing, vocabulary, speaking skills
and critical thinking skills that will be useful when I get to college. Additionally, it
has always been one of
my dreams to be able to go to a boarding school. Being able to attend a boarding school would give me a unique learning experience. It
would let me gain independence, and I would be striving to adapt in a foreign area. The scholarship would help pay off some of the tuition fees and it would make it more affordable for my parents to let me go to FFA. Receiving a scholarship would help me achieve my
dreams, help my parents with tuition fees, and
give me a boost of motivation to do my best in my studies. I enjoy the feeling of accomplishing something major, and I believe that attending FFA on scholarship would be exactly that: a major accomplishment.
Good luck in your future studies!