My interest in Management; Motivation letter/Scholarship

Hello everybody
I'm from Palestine . I'm new here and this first time for me to write a motivation letter to apply for a scholarship since my English is not good enough. I hope to get revision on my letter and also I need to get advise regarding the best place in the letter for writing my address and university address too.

Thanks brothers and sisters for helping

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I would like to apply for your master's scholarship program at your university for the autumn of 2014. My interesting is to pursue the management because I'm specialized in this field and I believe strongly pursuing this degree will prepare me to achieve my long-term objectives.

After earning my undergraduate degree in business administration from the Islamic University in Gaza, in 2001, I worked for various places. Over 10 years of working in trading companies as administrator then as manager, I have gained and improved my skills. Firstly, I worked for father's business. I remember his exciting feeling when he saw results of management implementation I had engendered in his organization. I was able to manage perfectly his office and improve the quality of his business after decades in random behaviors and administrative chaos. Also, I was responsible for planning, organizing tasks effectively in other companies, and was able to achieve all administrative responsibilities that facilitated the smooth running of the office. Moreover, I was responsible for communicating and coordinating between different activities. My jobs were good opportunity to improve skills and enhance knowledge and determine the priorities.

My interests lie in the field of management and I hope to pursue this degree program in view of achieving my long-term career goals.


After obtaining my undergraduate degree in business administration from the Islamic University in Gaza, in 2001, I gained work experience in different capacities.


... what skills?.... you better specify!