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Doctors: how furthering your education beyond high school will help your dreams.


ZandraW 1 / -  
Oct 18, 2011   #1
The topic is Describe how furthering your education beyond high school will help make your dreams come true.

Please check my essay for things like essay development, organization, essay flaw, grammar, and relevance to the theme. (as the instruction states)

The limit is 250 words

Where would we be without doctors? They are strong, wise, and highly respected in the community for saving lives. That's why my biggest dream has always been to be come an OB/GYN. My choose in particular that I want to major in is Reproductive endocrinology and infertility. It is a subspecialty in the medical field that focuses on the biological causes and interventional treatment of infertility. I have always been fascinated with child birth and the reproductive system. And in this field I get to work with both. But to be able to accomplish this feat I would definitely have to continue school way beyond high school. My plan is to attend Georgia State University for about four years, then I want to study medicine under a registered doctor as an apprentice. Therefore, by continuing my education beyond high school I can get the proper knowledge I need in order to follow my dream of becoming and OB/GYN. By continuing my education I will be able to provide for a future family and live comfortably without worry. I live by the quote 'It is today we must create the world of the future' by Eleanor Roosevelt. To me solid minds create a solid world without potholes and messes.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Oct 19, 2011   #2
That's why my biggest dream has always been to become an OB/GYN.

My choice in particular, is that I want to major in is Reproductive endocrinology and infertility.

I have always been fascinated by child birth and the reproductive system, and in this field I get to work with both.

Therefore, by continuing my education beyond high school I can get the proper knowledge I need in order to follow my dream of becoming an OB/GYN.

Good luck with school and have fun!

:)


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