I
had completed my Diploma in Graphic Design
. In in three years
duration of studies I havegained more knowledge and experience in design. Moreover, nowand am
now able to
transform my idea into computer which really amazed me when I have to use different types of software to create an interesting design.
At the meantime, I have always worked hard in every semester No matter what
grade I
have achieve,
d in the end. I am always I have
a positive mindset:
which is getting an A does not mean you produce the best work but
is to getting everyone that
the grader agrees with your
confident confidence and the definition of your work. Aside from that, I
have to constantly worked
on part time during college time to
earned some extra to support my project's material fees.
I hope the above corrections are consistent with what you intended to communicate. The next paragraph is about your scholarship application (to relieve your parents' financial burden.) This is all you need to say. Then you conclude with why MMU - add some mention of the specific classes you want to take there (or profs you want to study with) to show that you have done some homework about MMU's offerings. Some corrections:
I will have the opportunity to experience various cultures as it is to different cultures countries. The main purpose is to enhance my work with the powerful skills. and expand my experience, knowledge and social skills will be widely expanded to its amazing extend. I have done my research BE MORE SPECIFIC HERE .. . and also know that Art school among all in UK, MMU will be my top choice to further my studies.