My current career position in management has caused me to recognize that a well-rounded person needs to pursue both
|a life experience as well as an and educational experience. Knowing These two kinds of experience provide different kinds of knowledge.
Here, you try to use "not only ---> but also"
I desire to pursue not only an associate degree in business but a bachelor, and then my masters and beyond. I desire to pursue not only an associate degree in business but also a bachelors, and then my masters and beyond.
You are doing very well, but you need a list of your goals. Sometimes it is hard to express your goals, but you have to find a way to express them. Make a list of your goals for 2011. Then, make a list of your goals for 2011-2014.