Nevertheless, there were some people who underestimate about my decision, but it would not let me down
remove the about; try using another word for 'underestimate'. I know what you want to say, but the word seems wrong in this context. How about 'demeaned'/'spurned'/denigrated' ? :)
I always like to take part in any organizations which supports my passions
subject-verb error. 'Any' is singular and goes with 'supports'.
It is a challenge for me in working with the people because every individual has different characteristics and my job is to adjust myself into their characteristics in order to make a great team work and accomplish team's goal
'in working' is idiomatically wrong. 'to work' is better. :) the second time, try using another word for 'characteristics'... 'requirements' is a better word choice I feel.
Always be creative and try to think out of the box, those are my principle.
'Being creative and thinking outside the box are my principles.' The above sentence seems a bit passive.
Just like my favorite quotation, "There is always something", means that everything happens for a reason and there is not only one solution to solve it. That's the way I am living my life.
Rephrase this: "There is always something," which means that everything happens for a reason and there are multiple solutions to one problem. This quote reflects my outlook on life and this is how I choose to lead it. (Okay, this is just my addition. Feel free to use it or not. :) )
Otherwise, nice work! I tried to address whatever I could.
Keep revising!
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