You are repeating ''leader" so often that your essay don't sound good.
Just read it aloud and you'll understand what I mean.
A positive attitude is another essential quality a leader
must have in order to do well in office. A leader
must see things in a positive light or else everything will not go as planned. For example, if a huge crisis was going on and a leader
had a mind of a pessimist, he would scare "his people
" into thinking the situation is way worse than what it really is. On the other hand, and optimist would look on the "bright" side and think positive and think of a way to overcome the crisis and assure "his people"
that everything is OK. Which is something all leaders should do.
Respect is a quality that all leaders should have.
When a leader
is respectful, his people
will respect him in return. The people
want someone who looks out for their best interest as well as respect them. If a leader
doesn't show respect or show that they care, no one will accept him/her as their leader.A leader
is a role model. One who sets positive examples for others. A leader
who doesn't have the motivation, respect, and the right mind-set will not and can not do well in office. it's the ones who see the world as an optimist who will make great leaders.
I also consider that you should write better introduction: one sentences doesn't seem enoough for me.
I'm not a native speaker, so my suggestions might be wrong. You can take it or leave it. It's up to you.