I'd love to attain a career that allows me to share and express my passion for justice.
I don't really know what you mean here. You should give a sentence that explains why this is your passion, and not some other pursuit.
I have researched schools that have the courses that I need and desire in order to attain my goal of majoring in criminology. unnecessary
There were various colleges that have the courses I needed, but I decided to apply online to Cerritos College. ---any particular reason?
I'm excited and very committed to
participate participating in everything that will help further my career.
They want to know about your goals, so that means you have to do some reading about the various specializations you can have, the various jobs you can have, and even the research that is being done by people getting advanced degrees in your field. When you read some recent books and articles, you will develop opinions about the best kinds of specializations, and you will have some goals.
Why criminal justice instead of medicine, education, business, etc? What are you all about?