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"I love to learn, education is my passion" - Why you for this scholarship?


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This is all I can come up with so far.

For me education isn't just a requirement for the career I will pursue. Education is a passion. I simply love to learn and if I could spend the rest of my life in classroom pursuing some new form of knowledge, I promise you, I would. Obiviously I can't spend my life in a classroom, but I can still work in a research facility and search for those missing links and learning about things that haven't even been discovered yet. All I need is the opportunity.

Ok, so I added this to the end.


All I need is the opportunity to succeed. Unfortunately, every path has it's obstacles, money being mine. If education was a roller coaster ride I wouldn't even have enough to enter the park. By considering me you would be one step closer to giving me that opportunity and I would be one step closer to having it.

I'm not sure if that's good or not. Any other suggestions?
For me education isn't just a requirement for the career I will pursue. Education is a passion. I simply love to learn and if I could spend the rest of my life in classroom pursuing some new form of knowledge, I promise you, I would. ---talk is cheap. I don't think this part helps.

The way to answer a question about why you should get a scholarship is to explain your detailed action plan for achieving your specific goals. A person with a plan deserves respect and opportunity.

:-)

This would be a good first sentence of the essay, because it is interesting:
Obviously I can't spend my life in a classroom, but I can still work in a research facility and search for those missing links and learning about things that haven't even been discovered yet.
What are you going to school for, what would you like to study? I think adding something in about what you like studying, what fields you enjoy the most, what you plan to do with them, would be beneficial to you.



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