do i need to introduce myself in the essay??
I don't think you really do need to introduce yourself. They already know your name, so the thing to do is introduce your idea.
What is the idea that inspires you? What do you want to do? That is the stuff that really motivates the reader.
"Reach for the sky and if i should happen to miss
i'd I'll still be among the stars." I have said this to myself since the day I started kindergarten when I was on my daily journey to school, 75km away in Jeddah.
Stepping into the unknown, I
however possessed the willpower to take ...
myself to the stars and back and never let anything slow me down along the way! (Right here, add a sentence that tells your academic goal. That way, the reader will see that academic goal as a way of "reaching the stars."
... foresee myself being ...
I love volunteering and traveling.------Change this sentence to say something about how volunteering and traveling are related to your big idea, your big goal.
Below, I'll add a comma and capitalize the "I"
Holding the belief of "Each life is the inspiration of another life," I enjoy ...
...could leave my audience spellbound with vivid details! ----I am not surprised. You have a great communication style.
:-)