"What do you want to be when you grow up?" It is such a typical question, yet it compels children to venture into their innocent minds and let them imagine the world full of possibilities and encouragements.---Nice opening sentence!
But how would the little ones react if
they were told, "You are not talented or smart
They would be
into thinking that the world is a black hole, sucking
the potentialities and ambitions out of them.
The children nowadays are told "no" too many times, they do not need to hear it
again from their loved ones.
... in fact a bit haughty to be honest, and I
believed I could accomplish anything.
Somehow my parents' unconditional encouragement
and kind words became a staircase for me to finally reach maturity and grow into an independent woman.
...my parents certainly did not disappoint me, and were glad to hear I'd chosen
such a sensible career – they were a bit worried after I told them about becoming a robot.---This is great!
Without their support, I would never have
come to realize my calling.
Good essay! It shows you paid attention to the prompt and also your sense of humor.
Good luck in school, and have fun!