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Fascinated in Japanese's language and culture - scholarship help me achieve my goal?


aznboi136 1 / 1  
Jan 2, 2011   #1
The scholarship is for motivated students who's motivated to go to school and to express their goals to get a high education and has to be 250 words or less. The question is: How will winning this scholarship help you attain your goals? This is my first scholarship try-out and writing seems to be my weakest subject so I'm sorry if I have a lot of grammar mistakes. This is my first post on this site. So whoever can leave feedback on my essay, I really appreciated it. Thanks in advance :)

I have always been fascinated in Japanese's language and culture. It would be a privilege to travel over there, nevertheless, study there. In short terms of my goal, it's to travel to Japan and to study abroad there. In terms of family income, we're neither poor nor rich - however I cannot afford the tuition of studying abroad there. I believe that with your scholarship money, it will bring me a step closer to achieving my dream of studying abroad in Japan. As I have looked at other high school students studying abroad, they've said it has been a "life-changing experience" and a "once in a lifetime experience". As a foreign exchange student in Japan, it will open my eyes to new cultures, language and traditions. This experience will help me develop leadership and independent skills and thus will lead me to becoming a better-rounded person in order to guide me towards a successful future. Not only I will get these qualities by going Japan but it will help me prepare for college as it experience will be similar as college. As of leadership skills, I am one of the officers of Key Club at our school and with studying abroad in Japan; it will help me create more unique ideas and methods that will improve our ways in helping out our community.
swoosh18 4 / 40  
Jan 3, 2011   #2
It might help to talk more specifically about what makes you so fascinated with the culture.
OP aznboi136 1 / 1  
Jan 5, 2011   #3
okay thanks for the comment :)


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