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"expanding my leadership role" University future contribution& leadership Scholarship


ak21 3 / 4  
Feb 23, 2011   #1
Please let me know if it sounds good, and if i answered the question, this is meant to be less then 500 words. If you can please proofread.

2. How will you contribute to the university community and play a leadership role at the University of Ontario Institute of technology?

Many people define the term "leadership" in many different ways. For me leadership represents what we learn from the contributions we make for the community and our school. Through High school I have gradually contributed to the school, enriching my learning experience. Therefore learning great leadership skills by taking on various tasks and responsibilities and as a student I reflect the school I attend.

I first got a sense of leadership while joining the game programming Club in my first two month of high school. I started out as a member, wanting to contribute to the community. The GPC did so by creating a game, in the hopes of selling it and donating the money made to a charity. Though this task may be a challenge in creating a full professional 3D video game only by the students, we had hope. Through this I have learned that leadership is having intuitive, hope and determination, as that is the only thing keeping us in the GPC, and providing our own time unto this task. Though I fully learned this as I was made president of this new club I still believe I have a lot to learn about leadership.

I see myself contributing an even greater amount and expanding my leadership role once I enter University. I will contribute to the university of Ontario institute of technology by sticking to, good grades, seeking high self-esteem, self-confidence, as well as good behavior. In addition I will expand my skills of communication, interpersonal and my creativity skills, all a part of good leadership, at the university I attend. All of this, will reflect a positive image on UOIT, and as a new university, it will continue to flourish through my actions as I contribute to the available clubs and teams, not only that but UOIT will also help me sharpen my own leadership skills.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Feb 25, 2011   #2
Many people define the term "leadership" in many different ways. ---This does not help. I this not an interesting sentence. You should start the essay with a great sentence that inspires the reader.

Careful here: Through High high school I have gradually ...

contributed to the school, enriching my learning experience. Therefore learning great leadership skills by taking on various tasks and responsibilities and as a student I reflect the school I attend. Ah, this stuff is too simple. You can do better!

I first got a sense of leadership while joining the game programming Club in my first two month of high school. I started out as a member, wanting to contribute to the community. The GPC did so by creating a game, in the hopes of selling it and donating the money made to a charity. --Hey, I think this should be the beginning of th eessay. This is the first interesting part! :-)

alright, I think you should google this: leadership theory
Or this: leadership science

Learn about the theory pertaining to leadership, and it will give you good ideas. I think you can probably get some inspiration from specific leadership concepts.


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