~~I have done really well in all of my classes through out high school.~~< this part comes off as a bit boastful and since your other essay was about your struggle with history, it probably isn't a good idea to say you excelled in "all" of your classes ~~ believe that in all I have learned to my fullest potential, and that in one way or another I have excelled in each class.~~ same comment as above The classes in which I feel that I have excelled the most

~~and have caught my ought most interest~~ have been

~~ all of~~ my mathematic

s classes. In my past years of high school I have taken

Algebra I,

Algebra II

and Geometry.

This year I am taking

Pre-calculus. Even before high school I have always liked working with numbers, equations, solving problems. I attribute my

~~ liking of numbers and my~~interest and success in mathematics to my personality, passion and motivation in succeeding in life

maybe say something like "to solve puzzles/problems" instead? you can be motivated to succeed in life by every subject. I

~~f I wouldn't have the passion to succeed in life I wouldn't have tried my best in my classes.~~ Also, great teachers

~~I was lucky to have that~~ made it easier for me to

~~learn and ~~understand

and appreciate the complex subject of math.

honestly, the other essay is better. you need to work on this one a bit more. remember to always be humble in your essays.Good luck!