I have done really well in all of my classes through out high school.< this part comes off as a bit boastful and since your other essay was about your struggle with history, it probably isn't a good idea to say you excelled in "all" of your classes believe that in all I have learned to my fullest potential, and that in one way or another I have excelled in each class. same comment as above
The classes in which I feel that I have excelled the most
and have caught my ought most interest
classes. In my past years of high school I have taken A
lgebra I, Algebra
II and G
his year I am taking P
re-calculus. Even before high school I have always liked working with numbers, equations, solving problems. I attribute my
liking of numbers and myinterest and
success in mathematics to my personality, passion and motivation in succeeding in life maybe say something like "to solve puzzles/problems" instead? you can be motivated to succeed in life by every subject
f I wouldn't have the passion to succeed in life I wouldn't have tried my best in my classes.
Also, great teachers
I was lucky to have that
made it easier for me to
understand and appreciate
the complex subject of math.honestly, the other essay is better. you need to work on this one a bit more. remember to always be humble in your essays.