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SCHOLARSHIP- Degree in Accounting; personal development /career aspirations


impatient101 8 / 17 3  
Apr 10, 2014   #1
Explain how this award will assist your personal development and benefit your career aspirations. The content of your essay must be applicable to this particular scholarship and free of spelling or grammatical errors.. Could you please proofread this essay?

My name is Abhina Mishra. As an international student from a third world country, various things need to be considered before applying to colleges abroad. Applying to the States, one of the best places to pursue higher education seems like a distant dream to achieve because of the finances associated with it. My career aspirations include achieving a degree in Accounting so that I can pursue my career in multinational companies or banks. However, without the scholarship, I am not certain if I will able to achieve a College degree to fulfill my career goals.

My parents who work very hard to earn their bread and butter have done their best to provide me and my siblings quality education. They worked overtime or even during vacations to make ends meet. They sent all three of us to good private schools in the hope that we could face the challenges of the 21st century. I have been an A Grade student all my life. The scholarships that I received each year assisted my parents to manage resources better. The various cash rewards I'd get for achieving the highest marks in different subjects from a very small age motivated me to work even harder on my studies. Until now, I have always gotten scholarships to help fund my studies and I continue to work even harder to deserve it.(Remove this sentence) The scholarships and the grades I obtained in my school made me more confident in applying abroad for my Higher Studies. I want to achieve an International degree that can take me anywhere in the world. I want to study Accounting because I have loved the subject ever since I was introduced to it in my 8th Grade. In my School Leaving Certificate Examinations (SLC) of Grade 10, I achieved the highest marks in Accountancy from my school. This gave me a lot of confidence to pursue Accountancy for my Higher Studies and also as my career choice. Furthermore, I have always been good with numbers and calculations. However, without the scholarship, it will be very difficult for my parents to fund my education at La Roche.

Because of the huge difference in the exchange rate of The U.S. dollar and Nepalese rupee, I will not have sufficient fund for college education without the scholarship. Therefore, this scholarship will benefit me to continue my Higher education in a subject that I love so much. As a student who is committed to her studies, I will be able to pursue my education confidently with the scholarship and work even harder to achieve my career goals. Without having to worry about putting my family in economic hardship, I can focus clearly on my studies and perform better academically. I will be able to grasp all that College life has to offer without any hesitation or financial burden on my back.
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Apr 10, 2014   #2
The various cash rewards I'd get for achieving the highest marks in different subjects from a very small age motivated me to work even harder on my studies. (This is sentence I am referring to when I said you already mention working hard(see last paragraph) Until now, I have always gotten scholarships to help fund my studies and I continue to work even harder to deserve it.(Remove this sentence)

However, without the scholarship, it will be very difficult for my parents to fund my education at La Roche.(You used the word confidence a little bit to much..try to replace it with a different word (: Like...maybe..."Gave me the desire.." or something along those lines?(:)

As a student who is committed to her studies, I will be able to pursue my education confidently with the scholarship and work even harder to achieve my career goals. (You mentioned in previous paragraph about working harder).
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 11, 2014   #3
My name is Abhina Mishra. As an international student from a third world country,

Better straight away tell from which country you are;

I am Abhina Mishra from Nepal and as a student from a third world country, I need to consider many constraints before applying for a college in the USA, which is, in my view, the best place to pursue a higher education. It almost looks like a distant dream when I think of ways to meet the costs of the courses.
StwhWindresides 3 / 7 1  
Apr 11, 2014   #4
As an international student from a third world country = As an international student from the third world country.
Dear :)


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